date entered:9/8/08
context: group
activity: peer revision
I think that the peer revision really helped me today. Prior to class I struggled coming up with enough to discuss to make the word requirements. In the groups, I was able to see how other people expanded certain areas of their paper and where to condense. I think that having other students read my work, they are able to refine my thesis and ideas better than others because they are more familiar with the assignment. I still have a lot of work to do with my paper, but now I have direction. From peer review, I know that I have to more strongly assert the rhetoric appeals and I need to develop a stronger to give an innovative spin on my Honda Accord advertisement. Also, my partner marked areas of confusion with what I already have written.
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